L.I to make a poem about Beijing, China.
For this Summer Learning Journey activity we were asked to make a Poem of how it would be like in Beijing, China. Beijing is a city in china that is popular. Here is my Poem. this was a really hard poem to do.
Air Pollution floating around the air in Beijing
wearing mask because it's hard when I'm breathing
Flights are all closed so as the big busy roads
can also hear people making some codes
Coughing everywhere in the city
walking around town smelling mitty
On the road everywhere is fog
Right a head of us there is a big log.
Greetings Suila,
ReplyDeleteThat's great you have updated another blog post which is good. Wow that poem is really good but the spacing just needs to be a little closer. What have you improved on with your blog. I know you have being trying your best in the summer learning journey and in learning time at school.
Keep it up SuLia your doing very well!
Hello Chavda,
DeleteThank you for the feedback that you have given me. I also agree that the spacing of my poem needs to be a little closer.
Thank you Chavda!