L.I to write a short story.
Today I am doing the Summer Learning Journey's Day 3 Activity 2. The Summer Learning Journey is a program that helps children keep track of their learning during the holidays. I am glad that my school is participating because, the school can get more recognition and the students can learn all different sorts of things. My school(Panmure Bridge School) has had a great job with doing the Summer Learning Journey, so we are hoping to have another great year.
For this activity we were asked to create a short story that was at least ten sentences. Here is the Story that i have wrote.
Hi Sulia! This is an incredible story, and I can tell this took a lot of effort. It has a really nice story-line, and the ending was a touching way to end it off. I love how he continues to take care of the plant, though he knows he is growing ill. What is your favorite part about your story? Well done!
ReplyDeleteAwesome narrative Sulia - and what a lot of detail you have included. I really liked the last line. Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep your learning up over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Sulia!
ReplyDeleteThis activity you did was great, Great job for staying active with the Summer Learning Journey! What was the hardest part of this activity?
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