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   suliaApril 24, 2018 at 11:17 AM

   hello Bella. You have done your commenwealth games poster. I like the waz that you have alined everthing and have used all the print design rules. Good job

L.I is to give honest feedback to another person.
Today I have commented on someones work and gave ny opinion

Puncuation

once upon a time there was a little girl named Goldilocks. She went for a walk in the forest. It was a lovely day. You never saw a bluer sky no showers likely. Pretty soon she came upon a house. She knocked and when no one answered she walked right in.

At the table in the kitchen there were three bowls of porridge. Goldilocks was hungry. She took a few bites from the first bowl. Now there were fewer bites than there had been.

Full Stop and Capital Letter

Just then Goldilocks woke up and saw the three bear’s. She didn’t want to move. She was afraid she was face to face with her destroyer’s. She nearly passed out. She screamed “Help!” She jumped up and ran out of the room. Goldilocks ran down the stairs opened the door and ran away into the forest. And after this she never returned to the home of the three bears. But she wasn’t even sorry for what she had done! She had had a pretty bad time!

Commas and Apostraphe

“This porridge is too hot!” she exclaimed.

So she tasted the porridge from the second bowl.

“This porridge is too cold,” she said.

So she tasted the last bowl of porridge.

“Ahhh, this porridge is just right,” she said happily, and she ate it all up. She thoroughly enjoyed it!

After this she decided she was feeling a little tired. So she walked into the living room where she saw three chairs. Goldilocks sat in the first chair to rest her feet.

“This chair is too big!” she exclaimed.

So she sat in the second chair.

“This chair is too big, too!” she whined.

So she tried the last and smallest chair.

“Ahhh, this chair is just right,” she sighed. But just as she settled down into the chair to rest, it broke into pieces!

Exclamation Marks

What’s the matter with you Shane ?

Stop that at once

Where is the cinema in Crewe ?

Can I borrow a pen please ?

Give me that chocolate

Don’t move Kim

Could you tell me the right time please ?

What a fantastic joke

Question marks

L.I is to know what use puncuation for.

 

Making Connections

L.I is to make connections using text to self, text and world.
How I learned? I learned by reading an article and and understanding what making connections mean.
I learned about what making connections mean and how to use it.

LS1 Olympics

L.I is to play activity in one minute and participate. 
What I learned? I learnt how to do activities faster. 
How I learnt? By practicing and getting faster. 
Today I finished my LS1 Olympics Slide. It was fun to see people cheering us on.

Prioritising and Collaborating

L.I to prioritise tasks and collaborate to complete a job on time.
How I learnt? By collaborating with my team.
What did I learn? I learned about who is Anpanman.

Making Connections.

Commonwealth Games

L.I To learn about the Commonwealth Games.
What did you learn? I learnt who Sophie Pascoe is and motto of the Commonwealth Games.
How did you learn? I learnt by working as a team.
Today my team and I finished Commonwealth Games. We also learnt about new stuff while we were doing this poster.

Team Whakatauki

Today for inquiry we had to make our own Whakatauki. Our Whakatauki was Care for your team, care for others, and show love.We had to do this on a google drawing.We had to get into our groups that we were in for our minute to win it.

When we finished the google drawing we had to blog it on our blogger.When we write about it we had to publish it and put it in the must do task list.

Puncuation

LI. To identify and learn about the different punctuation I can use.
Today for writing we had to do four posters about punctuation.I was working with Sulia for the 4 posters for writing. I did 2 posters and Sulia did 2 posters so I did Capital letter's and Full stop and Sulia did Comma and Question mark. I learnt by making 4 posters and work with my buddy Sulia and work on 2 each so that it could be faster typing and getting images onto the google draw.