I am a Year 8 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 2 and my teachers are Mrs Anderson and Mrs Fisi'iahi.
Thursday, 28 March 2019
Editing Partners work | Writing
L.I revise and edit a recount.
for Writing we had partnered up with a person in our group. Each of us had forty minutes to write a recount about either Kiwi Sport(Ki o Rahi ), Kiwi Sport and Music. I had chosen to do Kiwi Sport first Session. When we had finished we had to mark each others work. Who ever didn't do that much edits had to do two recounts a bout the things we didn't write about. Then when your partner had finished editing they had to copy and paste thing work they edits on the story that I did. We also done points. For each edit that your partner had done it was one point.
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